Comments on: Lot’s of FUN with Lot’s of Visitors!! (Part II) http://drewandannainnyc.com/2008/02/02/lots-of-fun-with-lots-of-visitors-part-ii/ Just another WordPress weblog Tue, 07 Oct 2008 02:09:14 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Drew and Anna in NYC » Blog Archive » A giant copper lady and a man hanging upside down http://drewandannainnyc.com/2008/02/02/lots-of-fun-with-lots-of-visitors-part-ii/#comment-708 Drew and Anna in NYC » Blog Archive » A giant copper lady and a man hanging upside down Wed, 24 Sep 2008 15:33:18 +0000 http://drewandannainnyc.com/2008/02/02/lots-of-fun-with-lots-of-visitors-part-ii/#comment-708 [...] visit the Statue of Liberty and Ellis Island. We had tried it once before with some other visitors (holla Dan and Alan!), but we missed the last ferry by minutes. This time we made it to the ferry, however, it started [...] [...] visit the Statue of Liberty and Ellis Island. We had tried it once before with some other visitors (holla Dan and Alan!), but we missed the last ferry by minutes. This time we made it to the ferry, however, it started [...]

]]> By: Bryan and Jenn http://drewandannainnyc.com/2008/02/02/lots-of-fun-with-lots-of-visitors-part-ii/#comment-159 Bryan and Jenn Mon, 04 Feb 2008 01:44:40 +0000 http://drewandannainnyc.com/2008/02/02/lots-of-fun-with-lots-of-visitors-part-ii/#comment-159 Two times in your blog post it is mentioned that you got a "late start" to the day. Once mentioned that you did not leave the apartment until noon. Oddly, the reader is left wondering...Why on earth the late start? Your wonderfully written blog post seems to be missing some critical information describing the activities enjoyed after dark into the early hours of the morning. Maybe you could "ammend" your post in efforts to tame the wild immagination of your reader. Love You Guys!! Bryan and Jenn *written by Bryan Two times in your blog post it is mentioned that you got a “late start” to the day. Once mentioned that you did not leave the apartment until noon.

Oddly, the reader is left wondering…Why on earth the late start? Your wonderfully written blog post seems to be missing some critical information describing the activities enjoyed after dark into the early hours of the morning.

Maybe you could “ammend” your post in efforts to tame the wild immagination of your reader.

Love You Guys!!
Bryan and Jenn
*written by Bryan

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